benalibenali : now that is a wonderful way of expressing your nostalgia.
Fun to read and entertaining, yet, very expressive.
Good job
Ben |
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hatsmo : Hey Shawn
Any relation to Puff daddy by any chance, man You are good. I liked it, and it did bring back some memories.
salam aalaikoum
Hatim |
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does : Bravo! You hit the mark. You described my past in a such a wonderful way that made me want to go home for a while, but than I realized I'm too biizy working.:)
Great job, this should be a song. Any record executives in this community. Come on give this guy a shot.:)
Sallam. |
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ghalij : not bad shawn shady. I have enjoyed reading it. It did really bring memories from old days in backhome. I liked the " allaho ma inny saiem" it should really be printed in T-shirt like you said. It will be like a reminder when your mind or your eyes goes away too far where you're not suppose to:)
anyway keep enjoying us with your good poems. thumbs up!!! |
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dolmi4 : bravo shawn very well said; because im reding this article in a cyber club in casablanca and i live in boston.i was thinking the whole time about this subject and what my kids will be missing out on.the other day i saw a 7 year old walking and singing and his parents were 2 blocks away they were not wrried about his safety nor was he. |
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Mohammed Lebbadi : Great! We are planning to publish an English-language weekly in Morocco; can we use it? Mohammed. |
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laila10 : Congratulations! Beautiful work. I enjoyed so much reading your poem. It is very touching and expressive. Do you have anymore poems to share with us?
All the best
laila |
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alia : thanks bro, that was good, allahi khalik ow tbarkallah 3lik.
Keep up the great work. |
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hebah35 : Khoya Shawn, you brought back those unforgetables memories, only people living away from home sweet home , can feel what I'm feeling right now, you brought me back to the old days when I didn't have to worry about anything around me, just enjoy my life and be happy with the most important people in my life, my family and my friends.
Shawn, keep up the good work and good luck with what ever you do, and keep you good sense of humour going, walah 7ta twa7asht lablida, dima dima lmaghrib. |
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illy : you seem to be really talented, are you in the music busines? you should be like te first Moroccan rapper in English to come out in America or something, because everything you said made sense. |
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shawn shady : Thanx everyone for the feedback and the support...and yes Mohammed you can use it, that poem belongs to everybody who can relate to it.
Thanx. |
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Mohammed Lebbadi : Thanks Shawn, and if you have more poems or if you wish to express yourself in any other way, please let me know. We hope our newspaper will become a forum for Moroccans everywhere. My e-mail address is: lebbadi_moh@yahoo.com
Sincerely,
Mohammed Lebbadi |
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